movies that weren't quite dates
feelings that weren't quite complete
feelings that weren't quite complete
& goodbyes too cold for what was felt.
sharing deepest thoughts
and somehow stopping it from changing everything
it reached down her throat and tried to find a way to her heart
but she wouldn't let it
why wouldnt she let it
JUST LET IT
but time's up.
he's cut the lines from her naïve fingers to his heartstrings
and replaced her.
how do you feel heartbreak
when you never gave your heart in the first place
why does she feel this regret when she turned away from what was right in front of her for so long
so many times
so many hard conversations
all for naught
what happened to us
oh my. im speechless
ReplyDeleteyou're incredible and this is incredible and i want to know you and tell you that it will all be alright because with words like that you're going to be alright
ReplyDeletethe first two lines. killin it
ReplyDeletealso don't be so hard on yourself. it'll work out
Agreed, the first lines were great. I mean the rest of the poem was great too, but the first two really caught my attention. Nice job. And i totally feel what you said in this, I'm in the same place
Deletei agree ^^
ReplyDeletefirst two lines
and i dont know why but the picture just makes sense to me. when i think of hard conversations i think sitting in his car at 2 am talking.
you got me
"movies that weren't quite date" small but so huge and I wrote it on my quotes page in my journal in green and I only write special ones in green
ReplyDelete"and somehow stopping it from changing everything
ReplyDeleteit reached down her throat and tried to find a way to her heart
but she wouldn't let it
why wouldnt she let it"
this time these lines hit me.
Also I want to use something like that first line for a poem of mine. Not sure how I'm going to but I freaking love it.