Sunday, November 15, 2015

heartstrings

and the tears on her pillow
are screaming

get over it
grow up
pick your battles

but no one picks their battles
battles pick you

heartache finds you
and heartbreak breaks you

and she's gasping for air
because her heartstrings,

her heartstrings somehow

got tangled around her lungs.
and she's not used to them being pulled in this way

and only the tears are left

screaming.



















7 comments:

  1. Maybe it was that I read this out loud with "the funeral" from June's blog, and maybe it was that i did it again and it was definitely the writing and the last line and the line breaks like I talked about last week but oh well.

    I get excited waiting for yours every sunday.

    xoxo
    (yeah I can see why you didn't want me to remember you said that lol oh well)

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  2. "her heartstrings somehow
    got tangled around her lungs.
    and she's not used to them being pulled in this way"

    #stolen

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  3. "but no one picks their battles
    battles pick you

    heartache finds you
    and heartbreak breaks you"

    ugh those lines were so good. and i love the way this is layed out and everything about this post is amazing.

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  4. the heartstrings and the lungs got me

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  5. "her heartstrings somehow
    got tangled around her lungs.
    and she's not used to them being pulled in this way"

    really loved that line

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  6. this was beautiful and haunting and i can't get over how you managed to punch me through the computer screen and twist the air out of my lungs. you're amazing. keep doing what you're doing.

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