Sunday, August 30, 2015

maybe.

Welcome to my cerebral cortex.

My jungle gym.

My happy place.

My head space.

Right here and now is when my filter waves goodbye just like the people who used to say more than "hey."

This is where I'll think feel out loud and

 maybe

one of you desperate teens getting headaches from computer screens at 2:18 am will learn with me that

 feeling out loud can be the okayest thing to do.


There may be countless thoughts in my head at any unholy moment but

 maybe

I can just catch a couple and put them into a half-decent sentence that

 maybe

won't be as long as this one.

 Maybe

this blog will be the best in the class and I'll get 10+ comments on each post but

 maybe

you'll click "next blog" and I'll be lucky to get one nosy page view from my mom.

Let's get real.  I'll just put it all out there.  I'll just feel out loud and

 maybe

someone will listen.
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13 comments:

  1. Trevor KnorrAugust 30, 2015 at 7:06 PM

    The rhythm that your "maybe"'s ("maybe's"? idk) added to it made the poem flow from one line to the next so smoothly. Plus you had this line:

    "maybe

    one of you desperate teens getting headaches from computer screens at 2:18 am will learn with me that

    feeling out loud can be the okayest thing to do."

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  2. Clarissa McCallAugust 30, 2015 at 7:54 PM

    I love everything about this.

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  3. Clarissa McCallAugust 30, 2015 at 8:00 PM

    I love everything about this.

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  4. Delilah PiperAugust 30, 2015 at 9:07 PM

    I'll definitely be here and listening. Loving this post and your music.

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  5. ella ersonAugust 30, 2015 at 9:08 PM

    wow.

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  6. CloudwatcherAugust 31, 2015 at 5:17 PM

    No maybe. This will be amazing!

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  7. AnonymousAugust 31, 2015 at 5:38 PM

    I'm in love with this and I can't wait to visit again. And you can bet that it will be soon.

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  8. Cher HorowitzAugust 31, 2015 at 8:02 PM

    way good!

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  9. Sky TrillionSeptember 1, 2015 at 9:20 AM

    "one nosy page view from my mom"
    YES.

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  10. KetchikanSeptember 1, 2015 at 1:06 PM

    I will listen....

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  11. rosyln grey ☾September 6, 2015 at 8:45 PM

    i'm a huge fan of first sentences.

    & yours is killer (:

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  12. NelsonSeptember 7, 2015 at 1:38 PM

    Your blog is nice. Nice.

    Welcome.

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  13. Trevor KnorrSeptember 28, 2015 at 5:21 PM

    My mom is mad about my missing hw assignments rn so I'm hiding stalking your blog just wondering if we can get married over the internet without giving away our names.

    Yeah I like your blog.

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